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I. Main IdeaWho: Erica Su
Where: school's dormitory
When: 2006.10.17
II. Body
Basic background information
from Taipei, came to Tainan for almost 2 months.
now, lives in dormitory, ago, lives with her family.
there have 4 people in her family.
her major is Finance in STUT.
she likes to study, watch movie, listen music and go shopping.
she has lots of skills, such as cooking, playing piano and flute etc...
she wants to go Japan or Europe after graduate.
her goal is become a bank civil servant.
Writer's personal reactions
Erica is a easygoing girl.
she is very opoptimistic and independent.
she has lots of skills.
she has a great aim.
III. Conclusion
I am glad to meet this new friend.
I appreciate her personality and her thought.
I enjoy our time together.
posted by ********* @ 12:53 AM
2 Comments:
her goal is become a bank civil servant.
I think maybe can write in
"her goal is becoming a bank civil servant.
there have 4 people in her family.
Maybe you can use " there are 4 people in her family."
she likes to study, watch movie, listen (to) music and go shopping.
she wants to go (to) Japan or Europe after graduate.
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