Stage 2 -- Qualification P65 (exercise 1) 2
Last year all overseas students completed University Registration forms. Most overseas students finished University Library Membership Application forms. Lots of overseas students filled out the National Health Service Registration forms. Some overseas students finished International Students Identity Card Application forms. Several overseas students completed Accommodation Office Application forms and a few overseas students completed Magazine Subscription forms.
posted by ********* @ 11:36 AM
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After you revised, your paragraph was more concise. And in this sentence,Lots of overseas students filled out the National Health Service Registration forms. You used "filled out" is good phrase.
... And in this sentence,"Lots of overseas students filled out the National Health Service Registration forms," "filled out" is a good phrase.
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