Combined Qualifications
1. Attractive people have more favorable personal attributes than unattractive people.→The results establish that attractive people may tend to have more favorite personal attributes than unattractive people.
2. Economic sanctions are ineffective.
→It seems that the economic sanctions are probably ineffective.
3. Alcohol causes people to become violent.
→It has been said that alcohol might lead people to become violent.
4. Passive smoking causes cancer.
→According to preliminary studies, passive smoking might lead to cancer.
5. Recycling is the best solution to the waste disposal problem.
→In the view of some experts, recycling is probably a good solution to the waste disposal problem.
6. Physical exercise prevents depression.
→It seems that physical exercise may reduces depression.
7. Deep tunnels are safer and less vulnerable to earthquake shaking than are shallow tunnels.
→Based on the limited data available, deep tunnels are highly likely safer and less vulnerable to earthquake shaking than are shallow tunnels.
8. Private schools provide a better education than do public schools.
→It seems that the private schools might provide a better education than do public schools.
posted by ********* @ 10:29 AM
2 Comments:
In sentence three"It has beensaid that alcohol might lead people to become violent."
==> "lead people to" can change to "attribute to." I think that would be better.
1.The results establish that attractive people may tend to have more favorite personal attributes than unattractive people.
-->The results suggest that...
8. Private schools provide a better education than do public schools.
→It seems that the private schools might provide a better education than might public schools.
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