Description -- Draft 2
Today, I am glad to introduce a new friend, Erica Su. Erica Su is living in our school's dormitory. I knew her because she is my best friend's roommate. Erica is from Jingmei (景美), Taipei and she has been to Tainan for almost two months. Before Erica moved to Tainan, she lived with her family. There are four people in her family, father, mother, a younger brother and she. Erica's father is a decorator, her mother is working in Bureau of Labor Insurance (勞工保險局), and her younger brother is a first-grade of junior high school student.
Erica's major is Finance in Southern Taiwan University of Technology. According to what she learns, she wants to become a civil servant at a bank or sales in the future because she likes a challenging job. Moreover, Erica hopes that she has a chance to go abroad to broaden her knowledge before she starts her working. She wants to go to Japan or Europe after graduation.
In Erica's free time, she likes reading some books about management, watching movie such as science fiction films, listening English music and going shopping and so on... Erica also has lots of skills, which she likes to do in her spare time sometimes, such as playing the piano and the flute, cooking and learning Japanese.
It is my first time to interview Erica. I think Erica is a lovely girl whose personality is easygoing, independent and optimistic. Erica knows what she has to do and what she wants to do all the time, so she has a great aim in the future. Moreover, Erica is very talented because she has lots of skills. I really learn many things from her.
During the time I have interviewed to Erica, I really appreciate her thought and what she has planned with her future because it is really clear, she also works hard to let her dream comes true. Erica and I are good friends now and her spirit of hard working is very touching to me that I want to set her as my sample.
Description -- Draft 1
Today I am glad to introduce a new friend, Erica Su. Erica Su is living in our school's dormitory. I knew her because she is my best friend's roommate. Erica is from Jingmei (景美), Taipei and she has been to Tainan for almost two mouths. Before Erica moved to Tainan, she lived with her family. There are four people in her family, father, mother, a younger brother and she. Erica's father is a decorator, her mother is working in Bureau of Labor Insurance (勞工保險局), and her younger brother is a first-grade of junior high school student.
Erica's major is Finance in Southern Taiwan University of Technology. According to what she learns, she wants to become a civil servant at a bank or sales in the future, because she likes a challenging job. Moreover, Erica hopes that she has a chance to go abroad to broaden her knowledge before she starts her working. She wants to go to Japan or Europe after graduating.
In Erica's free time, she likes reading some books about management, watching movie such as science fiction films, listening English music and going shopping and so on... Erica also has lots of skills, which she likes to do in her spare time sometimes, such as playing the piano and the flute, cooking and learning Japanese.
It is my first time to interview Erica. I think Erica is a lovely girl who personality is easygoing, independent and optimistic. Erica knows what is she have to do and what is she wants to do all the time, so she has a great aim in the future. Moreover, Erica is very talented because she has lots of skills. I really learn many things from her.
During the time I have interviewed to Erica, I really appreciate her thought and what she have planned with her future because it is really clear, she also works hard to let her dream comes true. Erica and I are good friends now and her spirit of hard working is very touching to me that I want to set her as my sample.
Description - outline
Thanks! my dear classmate for checking my article.
I. Main Idea
Who: Erica Su
Where: school's dormitory
When: 2006.10.17
II. Body
Basic background informationfrom Taipei, came to Tainan for almost 2 months.
now, lives in dormitory, ago, lives with her family.
there are 4 people in her family.
her major is Finance in STUT.
she likes to study, watch movie, listen to music and go shopping.
she has lots of skills, such as cooking, playing piano and flute etc...
she wants to go to Japan or Europe after graduate.
she wants to go abroad to broaden her knowledge.
her goal is becoming a bank civil servant.
Writer's personal reactionsErica is a easygoing girl.
she is very opoptimistic and independent.
she has lots of skills.
she has a great aim.
III. Conclusion
I am glad to meet this new friend.
I appreciate her personality and her thought.
I enjoy our time together.
outline
I. Main Idea
Who: Erica Su
Where: school's dormitory
When: 2006.10.17
II. Body
Basic background information
from Taipei, came to Tainan for almost 2 months.
now, lives in dormitory, ago, lives with her family.
there have 4 people in her family.
her major is Finance in STUT.
she likes to study, watch movie, listen music and go shopping.
she has lots of skills, such as cooking, playing piano and flute etc...
she wants to go Japan or Europe after graduate.
her goal is become a bank civil servant.
Writer's personal reactions
Erica is a easygoing girl.
she is very opoptimistic and independent.
she has lots of skills.
she has a great aim.
III. Conclusion
I am glad to meet this new friend.
I appreciate her personality and her thought.
I enjoy our time together.
Combine sentence
1. Chihuahua, the largest Mexican state divided into two regions, one is a mountainous area in the west, the other us a desert basin in the north and east.
2. Disey World, an amusement park in Oilando Florida, caver a large area of land, including lakes, golf course, campsites, hotels, and a wildlife preserve.
3. Jamaica, the third largest island in the Caribbean Sea, is one of the world's leading producers of bazxite which is an ore that make the Aluminum.
4. Robert Ballard is an oceanographer who made headings in 1985, discovered the remains of the "unsinkable" passenger ship --Titanic, which has rested on the floor when it strucking an iceberg of the Atlantic Ocean since 1912.
5. William Shakespeare's father, John Shakespeare, was a glove maker and a town official. He owned a shop in Stratford-upon-Avon which is a town about 75 miles northwest of London.
6. The Republic of Yemen, located at the southwestern tip of the Arabian Peninsula, is an ancient land which has been host to many prosperous civilizstions, including the Kingdom of Sheba and various Islamic empires.
How to make a dish--tomato scrambles eggs
Actually, I can't cook, but there only one dish I can make is called "tomato scrambles eggs". "Tomato scrambled eggs" is very delicious that it taste a little sour and sweet. It is very easy to cook, too. You just prepare two to three tomatoes, one or two eggs and a little fructose.
Now let me show you how to make it. First, chop the tomatoes. Second, put some oil and chopped tomatoes into the wok, let it heat and waiting for the tomatoes are almost become tomato soup. Third, put the eggs and a little fructose into the wok, this dish is almost finish when the eggs are well-cooked. Finally, of course, don't forget dish the "tomato scrambled eggs" into the plate. It is quite easy, right?
How a breakfast cereal is made
How a breakfast cereal is made. First, the wheat is harvested from the field. Second, the wheat grain is transported to the silos and stored it in. Third, the grain is cooked to soften and then cut and formed into thin strips. Next, these are woven into biscuits, after each biscuit is baked until brown. Finally, it is packed ready to be eaten.
